 A Person? 2009-11-24 . chapter 31 Fabuloso! It was great. I am opposed to MxM and i stll liked the story |
 Y 2009-11-22 . chapter 31 Devil's Appeal was too cute for words. Loved all of your characters! :) Especially Markus Reed and Maria. Really interested in those two. And whatever happened to Maddy and Matt at some point? You got me thinking that they were part of Salax and Aureus's down points and downfall! Haha, I didn't suspect Reed to be the traitor at all until he suspiciously helped Aureus. Then I knew something was fishy..
anyway, thanks for the delightful story! |
 Blind-Kira 2009-10-11 . chapter 31Well, so much for my villain support, Salax turned out to be as much a hero as anyone. Wow, I never sow that coming, what with him being an angel too, boy did that blow my mind, so to speak.
I loved the story, love the moral of it too. Salax was wonderfully built as a character, in my opinion, and sweet Aureus was almost as good -fu fu, joking, he was awsome too, but I can't help it, I always love the bad-** guy more-. Very nice plot, lovely build-up between the main pair. Just lovely all around. I can say it has been a great joy to read your story.
I thank you dearly for a great read! |
 Blind-Kira 2009-10-11 . chapter 5I was determined to comment after I'd read the whole story, but I simply cannot help myself, I just have to comment a bit now ^__^
I really love your choice of names for them, if my Latin hasn't gone too rusty and I'd by any chance gotten them wrong, they suit them to the T. Me being the villain-demon-evil loving kind of grupie -*fu fu*-, I greatly favor Salax. And I love the chemistry between them, plus I really love the way your write. Cursive ideas, descriptions consistent but not overly done, a rich style though not pretentious, easy to fallow but certainly not a pauper dish. Just my kind of read, exquisite.
Can't wait to see how things evolve, I really hope by the end of it the yummy bad guy gets at least half of what he wants, don't you just hate it when the "good prevails", and all that jaz? Don't answer that, I'll find out on my own.
On to the rest of your lovely story then, ta ta until I will feel again the compeling need to comment "a bit" more *fu fu*
Best regards. ^__^ |
 LeahDude 2009-07-23 . chapter 31Aw! I love them so much! You're a really good writer and I loved this story so much. I want an Epilogue! Please? With...a year later? Huh? Huh? Whadduya think? Huh? Huh? Just kidding. Even though I'm curious as to what happens I think you ended it really great and I wouldn't want to spoil it. It's awesome as it is. So. I loved Salax and Aureus, oh! and Bacchius...did I spell that right? Hated...Markus and Maria. And Marius...I'm not sure. I mean, Aureus thought the world of him and the more you learned about him, the more you liked him, in my opinion, so I learned to love him eventually. But I liked how you built Salax up. He's really complex and has a lot of levels to him in the end. Wait. What's that film about layers or something? With an onion? Shrek! "I'm like an onion." "What, smelly?" "No. Layers. Onions have LAYERS!" That film was awesome for a cartoon :D But I really liked the way you wrote him. And Aureus aswell is a nice character. So. I love the story. I liked the way you wrote it and…I have odd socks on. Ha. One’s blue and white stripes with red sailor anchors on them and the other’s blue with little Superman logo’s all over. God my socks are so cool. And you know what they say, about how your socks prove how cool you are ;] It means I’m cool! Honest! Kidding. I’m a nerd really :P It’s something I’m proud of. |
 Sophie 2009-07-13 . chapter 31 ^^ This was pretty good. I particularly liked your juggling of good and bad in Salax. There were a couple of times you seemed to get a little too close to some of the romance clichés but I think your good writing kept it from crossing that line. ^^ I wouldn't have mind seeing a little more action, but I liked the action scenes you did have. Thanks for the story! |
 Scarlet Hyacinth 2009-04-02 . chapter 31I really enjoyed the story - read it all in one day :). One thing though - I found the thing about the angel constitution a bit weird and the ending a bit rushed. I wasn't very surprised when Markus ended up the villain - it would have been too predictable to be Maria and Markus was the only other option (the rest of the characters weren't that well shaped). Anyway, overall, good job, I was surprised the rating was T though, taking into account that you did write a sex scene :P. I'm now hoping you maybe wrote a continuation - like Bacchius' story - will go check this out now. Much wuv, Scarlet |
 Hopelessly Involved 2009-01-29 . chapter 31Excellent story. I love Aureus and Salax to death... okay maybe not. It was very well written and the plot was really well though out. Keep up te good work. |
 JtheChosen1 2009-01-15 . chapter 31truly awesome story! I couldn't stop reading it! now onto the next part! |
 cajun-cuteness 2009-01-01 . chapter 31WAH!
NO!!
It can't be over! AH! |
 cajun-cuteness 2009-01-01 . chapter 30Muahahaha!!
The Council SUCKS! |
 cajun-cuteness 2009-01-01 . chapter 29BUT HE DIDN'T BETRAY YOU! |
 cajun-cuteness 2009-01-01 . chapter 28LOL. Salax is panicking!! |
 cajun-cuteness 2009-01-01 . chapter 27...
Aw!!
They are so sweet. That's not what most people I know would say, but this is so sweet! |
 cajun-cuteness 2009-01-01 . chapter 26WHAT THE EFF!?
I so didn't expect that. I kinda did, but I didn't. |