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| hateandkill-D 2006-12-10 ch 1,   | Cool. I like the emotion. Great job. |
| Leeona Trance 2005-03-22 ch 1, | Wow. As the Italians would say, che colpisce duro! (It hits you hard). Amazing is all I can say. Wow. ~Leeona Trance |
| THROUGHTHESEEYES 2005-03-18 ch 1, | Great, sad, but great. I like the line"I wasn't born yet, and your eyes were still closed." Those questions- they are just begging for answers...Thought provoking. |
| Moon Drops 2005-02-21 ch 1, | I like this. It reminds me of when my friend died in a car crash. I used to hate this person, but then I grew to know her, and I wanted to be her friend. Just as I realized that, she died. :( |
| from beneath the bell jar 2005-02-19 ch 1, | that was really sad |
| B. Amestoy 2005-02-19 ch 1, | :'( sad poem... |
| Summerdazed 2005-02-19 ch 1, | wow...this is one good poetry. =summerdazed= |
| TheLastKiss 2005-02-19 ch 1, | I liked it. It makes me think quite a bit of all the people I have lost in my life. |