if your teacher gave you a low grade for this then she sounds like my english teacher from last year...the woman liked things she could understand over things that made sense and she couldn't pronounce Tybalt! lol, anyways, I really enjoyed this. It is beautifully worded, and I can relate to it. Brilliant job!

~Hip

'Keeps black my secret, my hidden night.' That's such a good line, Kattadin. I can't write poems. lol

I love this poem. The imagery is great, and it flows well. It feels dark in a beautiful way. 10/10.