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| Takeshi Kaneroshima 2005-02-22 ch 1,   | hihi! whee supposed to be mugging but ur stories rock too much. read them ALL again one more time. haha... u have great potential and good imaginaition. keep it up@ |
| Ohmm 2005-02-21 ch 1, | Hey this is good, just that you need more buildup and foreshadowing in order for it to be believable =). Your narrative is great! |