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| Angelic Lucifer 2005-04-02 ch 1,   | ((i'm back too!)) yummy poetry there. i like the repetition esp. in the last stanza when you change "yesterday" to "tomorrow." it gives a nice flow and makes you think in beats instead of words. could be a little looser - seems a little to structed when you get to the end because of the tone you're setting of this change. i like it, though. |
| firemounrain 2005-02-19 ch 1, | That's an amazing feeling. I like the poetry too. |