This chapter was really funny. I feel soo bad for Jesse. I wonder how she is going to have to explain this to her grandparents. This story is my favorite of all the stories you've written so far so PLEASE finish it. THINK!

ha! awesome chapter. loved the gun popping and all. Anyways,

Oh man. That was funny! Painful but funny. I can so relate to Jesse falling down those three steps 'cause i do that all the time. Haha. Yes, painful. I like how theres lots of details. ::smile:: Write more and please please finish. I know you can do it! ;)

hahaha I feel sorry for Jesse. Really creative story. Can't wait for more!

Well, I will now predict the outcome of this-Taylor likes Adrian, Adrian thinks they're both ** heads, Jesse is screwed doubly... and you'd better have a happy ending or i'ma gonna be pised...*aHEM*I like Taylor, she needs a HUG! XD I think she needs a big hug, then a swift kick in the **. I Love it though, you know that^^ Story Time? I think so~!-Mesa knowsa yousa~!

Me so so so very very sorry!! All me does on weekends is sleep and eat, nothing else! And the same thing repeats itself on weekdays, too... God I live my life like a retired cow...

But me luves yo stowy to bits!! XDTalking about sympathetic stares, my mom started giving me those when I suddenly started laughing for no reason (at least that's what it seemed to HER) on the computer... I was reading the Adrian + raw fish + getting him fired scene... yup. XP

Keep on writin'! Sorry I couldn't read this sooner... my deepest apologies, my highness. XD

Hey! My name is Riley and I most certianly am a lady. *Belches loudly and scratches butt* ...What?!

Except for the moving part, This pretty much matches my life. Great story!!

awesome story so far! can't wait to hear more of it.

TOO SHORT BIZITCH!I love her! XD She reminds me of a mix between you me and a plate of sushi! lol

OMG! It amuses me to no end, though you did say "she existed the bathroom" instead of exited. Silly silly girl.See you tomorrow ^.-I like the composition and order of description- putting the description of Adrian after her was mentioned for the first time, it made it much more personal! tes magnifique love!Adios Amiga!

Look look Tiff Tiff! I actually came and I'm writing a review! (squeals like an **) I can't believe I was able to get off ma lazy bum and read; you know me... But I love the story!XD Jesse's sarcasm made my day!XP Her grandparents are awesome, I can't wait to read more. I'll be coming here often.

omg! I love it, I LOVE IT!1 I love her grandparents. They're so crazy! It's wonderful! Keep going! I need to read chapter 3/

dude! whats up?!

Hey, this is like you're bestest bud ever writing a review not because you told me to but because i love you so and in a not prison movie kind of way.

Anyways, i really like the grandparents...again, and joey is right when she says that this is an awesome story.

Wake up people post some gosh darn reviews...oh and go what constantine because that movie rocks...yeah.

Anyways, great story and laters. Post some more because i'll find you, i know where you live and "you'll get clamidia and die".

laters

I LOVE YOU...er... Reeks... HAHAHA It's your favorite World-Dominator again! And I LOVE YOU! XD I love her room- I WANT IT- and just to complain- I LIKE sushi! lol see you after the break-Neo

great start! haha the grandparents are realy funny..man i wish mine lived in los angeles! update asap