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| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseM yet again this is amazing, this is like what happened to me and my best friend, but we're patching things up now, I hope. There seems to be so much emotion in both of your poems, I'd love to read some more x weasel within x |
| Armas Apple 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abuseAw. I thought this was gonna be a happy poem. It seems sad. Reminds me of life |
| dustytiger 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abusegreat peice, i think a lot of people will relate, it's hard when you lose someone you've known for a long time, thank you for sharing |
| AboveTheSalt 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abuseohh i love this.the format is beautiful.the repetition is brilliant.spacing = eloquent,wording = perfect. love it. -salt. |