By the looks of the title I was expecting some graphic description of bewitching blue eyes and honey-blonde hair ... the looks of a siren. But this is surprisingly Christian in its treatment. I like.

WowThat was great and beautiful. I love this poem it shows a lot of sensitivity and I think you put a lot of heart into it. I've read the reat of your poems and you are one unique writer. You pick different and unusual topics (to me they are different from what i normally read) to write about. You are an excellent writer and you should never stop writing.

You are going to my favorites list!

GREAT JOB!

~PyroChica~*