The irony of this poem is quite good.

Death in Immortality is the true death

not bad, but the last stanza was quite stiff and didn't end the poem spectacularly.

i can see where you're coming from, but the ideas were kinda stuck inside yr piece and didn't fully shine through.

and yes, im inertia personified currently, but guilt-laden for giving bleahy overdue reviews. much apologies.

wow...very good...

i liked this...to me it seemed very sad and heart broken...i love it...said extremely well...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~

not bad;but not you.

-kismet.

very deep poem, there are many layers to what you are saying here, well done again.

behind crystal plates,

entombed lenin's body lays,

for all those that pay.

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plastic is the way,

credit card of faux rose red,

bathroom curtain lace.

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whoa..deep..interesting..i liked it:)

thats interesting... i like it!