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| Eirien 2005-04-23 ch 1,  | abusePowerful, sad portrayal. Quite long, but gripping and intense. I love the question at the end ... the only one I know who willingly walks into the abyss is Jesus ... Great poem that has really touched me. |
| bkwy 2005-02-22 ch 1, | abusehey. great job there. i can relate to it... perhaps more than u'll ever know =) sigh. sup with all that angst... just take things in life as they come... hard knocks come as part n parcel along with the good things in life... just bear with it kayys? =) |
| Vampyre Dork 2005-02-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was a very sad poem/story. I wish I could just go and undo her past! Nobody deserves to grow up like that. I really enjoyed reading your other poems! I can't wait until you post more! |
| Gaki Toki 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abuseHonestly...I have before and I would now. But that's not the point, so I loved this, the flow the rhyming...it was quite interesting, and if you're really new here, I'd love ta snag ya ta read some a my stuff, I love infput from those I know little about, it just kinda puts it all into place. I grew up in a great family...and am STILL growing int hat same atmosphere, so I guess I don't have much room to talk but still, I liked how this portrays the emotions, the mind games almost...hm...angsty, just the way I like it! Write more, I'll watch it if you review me...is that like blackmail? I always thought that was cruel to make someone review you, but when you review it gives me a link to go to your profile so I guess that's what I'd want it for...(so sorry if it sounds like a kind of blackmail, it's not supposed to...lol) |
| Thyrt 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abusewow...deep..i'd save her:D..but i don't know her..and if i did i'd at least try to help..but it seems as if to much damage has already been done.. |