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| bkwy 2005-02-22 ch 1,  | abuseEmpires fall and people fade but always they will stay i like that line lol. =) good effort. produce more of such works !! =) |
| Vampyre Dork 2005-02-21 ch 1, | abuseI really love the use of colors throughout the poem! And the imagery's wonderful! You could really get a good picture of that sunset in the beginning. Very descriptive and well done! |