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| Ruby 2005-05-05 ch 1,  | Very good, very sad |
| Takeshi Kaneroshima 2005-02-21 ch 1,  | i enjoyed this immensely. though not one of your best works IMHO, this was still good as you were contricted to a fairy tale setting. no bitchiness in this one so you must have some other hidden potential. i have noticed that you like to end your stories with a... not sure how to say it la. like " the young man never told his family" or " inside the room, they continued arguing" or something liddat. la. dunno how to say it. but i feel its good tt ure developing ure own style. rock on! ee im jose btw. |