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| NearlyPrescient 2008-08-01 ch 11,   | a very good read. having kept relatively up to date on 'here, have a husband', its quite easy to see how you've progressed as an author. you've really made some serious progress in writing and in life (it seemed relatively obvious that this was written first). all in all, a very good read. |
| NearlyPrescient 2008-06-17 ch 1, | great so far |
| Satie 2007-08-20 ch 11, | I just happened upon this story the other day and I must say that I completely fell in love with Zeke. He reminds me a little of my best friend. I'm definitely going to look into the other things that you've written. |
| lilxseeker 2006-04-13 ch 11, | oh man i absolutely love your story and Something Corporate! great job!! it's great! |
| GrAcIe 2005-12-14 ch 11, | i loved it, it had a few minor flaws and untied loose ends but it was a good read =) keep writing and i'll keep reading! |
| written off as theatrical 1... 2005-07-27 ch 11, | I really, really loved this story. A lot. Zeke is wonderful, and the way that the story played out was lovely and thoughtful. Great job! |
| Melika Elena 2005-07-25 ch 11, | What a great story. Short (chapter-wise) and bittersweet, it was a definite pleasure to read. I read Don't Shoot the Messenger, first, and I saw how you incorporated Zeke into there. Very cool. Your writing reminds me of Sarah Dessen, and I'm jealous at how talented you are. Nevertheless, I'll continue to read and review your work-- like Alex is to Zeke, I'm addicted! |
| DragonFaeLynn 2005-07-14 ch 11, | MAKE A SEQUEL! *.* |
| DragonFaeLynn 2005-07-14 ch 10, | Wow... I love this story very very much! It's going on my favorites. I like that song... *.^ heehee. It's so freaking sweet! T.T Great job! |
| DragonFaeLynn 2005-07-14 ch 9, | *tear* I feel awkward saying this, but that reminds me of how my mom and dad used to be... not so nice... lol. in more ways then one i can relate to alex. i like it. that's probably one of the reasons why i'm so addicted to this story. |
| DragonFaeLynn 2005-07-14 ch 8, | um... *cough*... wow... |
| DragonFaeLynn 2005-07-14 ch 7, | Awe... I had hoped that she wouldn't do something stupid. I'm surprised that he didn't throttle her for not trusting him... That's how it usually goes. I'm glad your story is different. I'm tired of all the 'why're you here? you cheating on me?' 'no. how could you think that of me? do you not trust me enough?' 'i'm sorry, forgive me?' 'we're through.' or the sometimes 'of course baby, i forgive you.' lol. it's usually always the same... |
| DragonFaeLynn 2005-07-14 ch 6, | Hm... Uh oh... I hope she doesn't do anything stupid... |
| DragonFaeLynn 2005-07-14 ch 5, | eh erm... this chapter made me cry. lol. that's pretty sad, i know, but it was a really sad chapter and really good at the same time. T.T Zeke's a really good guy. |
| DragonFaeLynn 2005-07-14 ch 4, | Hahahahahaha! That's almost exactly how my dad was with my mom! I would L.O.V.E to give that man a piece of my mind. This story keeps gradually getting better and better. You have a nag to make every single chapter better than the last. Go you. lol. |