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| bittersweet suicide 2006-03-16 ch 1, | I get this so much. I feel this way sometimes. People just see the outside. never inside. great job keep writing |
| amz381 2005-06-24 ch 1, | Love It! And I think your right. You can't see it all in a glance. You can't understand what's going on through just one look. Just be carfull if you go to look closer. Think about it before you do it. Aw crap I went all poem-y. Ek! Sorry. |
| kori300 2005-03-22 ch 1, | i read the story that you told me not nto read well it is a great story jackie see you at home |
| Sagaciouspnay 2005-02-23 ch 1, | Wow...my Jackie's getting popular in the reviews ^__^- Keep up the wonderful works Ms. Writer-to-be :) xox-Rice girl |
| Lain Shadow 2005-02-21 ch 1, | It's breathtaking, this is really good,At the end I let out a breath I didn't know I was holding. |
| LiKePiNk 2005-02-20 ch 1, | Amazing message here. I can total relate to a lot of it, both from the "girl"'s point of view and um.. the glancers point of view I guess LoL. Anyways keep writing this is an awesome poem! ~LP~ |
| Vampyre Dork 2005-02-20 ch 1, | I loved that poem! Made me almost start crying, but that was really, really good! In my opinion, any poem that makes me want to cry is well written. =) I'm looking forward to more of your poems! And hooray for Vampire related usernames! |