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| thank you thoughtful 2005-06-07 ch 1,   | this was lovely. i am in awe. i am enamored. |
| Apollyion 2005-03-18 ch 1, | That was one of the most ridiculous pathetic excuses for a poem as I think I've ever read. Your structure is ludacris and your word usage is that of a nine year old. As to your review of my "Divide and Conqueor" Your stupidity shines brighter than your lack of common sense. The story has yet to unfold as that was just the prolouge, giving some back information, you must be a bigger imbecile than I thought not to have realized this. |
| Veryspicycheese 2005-03-11 ch 1, | This poem is very good, and I appriciate the negative review... I will say I agree with you.Anyways, on to my review of this poem... Excellent imagry, beautiful structure and flow. I hate leaving reviews like this because you wrote it and obviously know all of this... but I am not finding anything to critique you on. So bravo.-Nick |
| Boadicia 2005-02-27 ch 1, | This is fantastic! I believe that this is the first rhyming poetry that I've read from you (although that may not be the case -- I never remember these things)and I like it just as much as your freestyle poetry! I usually tend towards freestyle on fictiopress because the rhymes often sound forced and unnatural, but this piece flowed beautifully! I also like the different spacing in the first and last stanzas. In all ways, this measures up to your usual excellence! |
| Infinity Plus One 2005-02-21 ch 1, | The first two lines are interesting rhymes, and they go together well as far as I am concerned. I also admire the way that you've written the two verses, using dark, but beautiful imagery. "Life infusion- / Mind confusion-" like the first two lines, they go well. A 'life infusion' is also an interesting concept. Well done on writing this poem - I enjoyed it. It's on my ever-increasing favourite stories list. |
| AntiPleasure 2005-02-20 ch 1, | Your reviews are a work of art themselves so I thank you. I'm sure you receive praise of your reviews anyway, now don't you? *smiles* I thank you for taking the time to read my poems, again, it made me smile. I'm not very good at giving reviews but I can always give my honest opinion. I can tell you that the rhyme scheme was well thought out and you did not force any word, I find. I think what makes this poem 'yours' are these mere lines: "Brain contusion, Blood profusion;" and: "Life infusion— Mind confusion—" |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-02-20 ch 1, | very sharp and with a wonderful flow. |