Reviews for A Skin's Permission

kaotikorps13
2005-06-20
ch 1,

cool plot... i only read this one cuz its kinda late and i ge fidgety at times... i assume the rest (or at least a few) of the other writnings continue this story or something relative... i liked it... i got confused a little bit cuz i didn't notice krek's accent that much in the begining where i could quite easily toward the end... the description of the Dark was pretty cool... since i've gotten a lot into H. P. Lover Craft ( a really freakin good horror writer) i've grown partial to vivid descriptions... theyh definately hold a lot more of a scary apsect, because the Reader begins to fill in the blanks with guesses that would scare the reader... vivid descriptions i think are hard to pull, but im sure someone like ur self could do it easily... i don't expect u to change ur style... but try it one day with like a mini story... just to see... other than that... immaculate writing... i gotta check up on it more another time... bye for now and keep up the good work

Tessabe
2005-03-02
ch 1,

I do hope you plan on continuing this, it's caught my attention.

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