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| Modulated 2005-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseGood, graphic description, you paint a detailed picture of words. Keep it up. |
| Relayer 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abuseThose last lines from "your parents..." are beautiful. Well done. It would be more effective if you edited it so it was layed out using seperate lines (use shift+space on the preview window) |