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The Angels will
Carrollesque
2005-02-20 . chapter 1
Good, graphic description, you paint a detailed picture of words.
Keep it up.
Relayer
2005-02-20 . chapter 1
Those last lines from "your parents..." are beautiful. Well done. It would be more effective if you edited it so it was layed out using seperate lines (use shift+space on the preview window)
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