This flows so well. This could definitely be an excellent song. I think that the repetition and variation is very strong.

"And I close my eyes because I’ve knownKnown it all along"

"And I think I’ve always knownThat youWere a dance I had to danceAlone"

I liked this transition a lot.

Another lovely poem. I have a serious case of the shivers at the moment. It's wonderful--especially the last lines.

i really like this! it's got the rythm to it that makes hte reader hear the song, it almost twirls... good job!