the last line is perfect. this whole thing is mesmorizing- amazing word choice.

Absolutely gorgeous.I wish I could write like you do.You express yourself beautifully.

I'm really tired and full of coffee so I'm not going to be real intelligent in the following reviews...I'm hungry, too. I digress.

Title is wonderful, and the last two lines just tie it all together. Like a nice circle...all tied together with a black bow. Not the shiny type of ribbon either. Just flat. And frustrated and annoyed. Hm who knew ribbon was so emotional? Sorry. The poem was great. Smile, now going to the next poem.

This is by far one of the best poems I've ever read. You have a great style and very sincere tone.