I love this poem, it gave me goosebumps while i was reading it.
Very powerfull.

Indijana

*shivers* The last line gave the whole poem a surreal feel, but maybe that was just me. For some reason it made me think of ghosts, but I'm a bit strange, so don't feel offended if that wasn't at all what you intended (I'm not naive enough to believe that my interpretation of a poem is ever really the same as the author's).

The lines "Through your betrayal/...I have learned portrayal" confused me...still confuse me. Portrayal of...? Maybe it's personal, but if it isn't I would greatly appreciate it if you would email me and unconfuse me...I hate confusion.

Again, excellent poem. Keep writing!

Nice poem, and easy to realte to. Best friends forever? It's rarely the truth.