this seems like a very deep poem to me, like it could have more than 1 meaning. but i dunno. yeah. lol, sorry. its a really good poem though, i love it.

-k

This poem's obviously had an effect on me, even if I don't realise it.

I don't actually remember reading this poem, and I was just browsing through authors when I found this, and I thought Oh my God! Didn't I write that?

But according to my computer I wrote a poem called Fade... (not the same words, but the same title and on the same basic subject) AFTER yours was published. And I'm beginning to vaguely remember reading this.

Your poem must be pretty good to want to stay in MY subconscious (I'm a pretty critical person). Congratulations on it. Simple, but effective.

Xavier

So powerful, i just read through you're poem tempted again and i disagree what i said about the last two lines...sorry...i actually get it now! this one is better in my opinion, its simple but quite melodic and um innocent if thats the right word to use x weasel within x

pretty cool. I feel quite similar w/ my friends at school. I start talking and I realize that they're not even listening!!

Besides the fact I love any poem that has to do with shadows, this is just really good. Plus it makes sense. Because there are some good poems that don't really make sense... Yeah I'm probably just crazy.

Dude, I think we're soulmates. From reading your profile, you seem so much like me that it's scary. o_O; There are a few exceptions, of course. ((I'd freak if there weren't)) But, otherwise...FREAKEH!! Anyhoo, great poem. It totally rawks. I like the short lines; it really emphasizes the angsty-ness of the poem. W00t for you! ^_^

Somtimes I think of just fading away. It hurts when no matter how much you do or say it always goes unoticed or not heard. Great poem.

I want to fade. Great poem. i like how how they don't hear your voice...I feel like that a lot...Keep it up