Very intresting structure, I like it.

Wow, this is really gerat. I like it.

hm how interesting. Seems like the conversation I sometimes have with myself when I look in the mirror and like my hair for once haha. Interesting.

Your poetry and stories are simply exquisite.

Ah, yes, another confusing dialogue poem thing. I love these things! Reminds me of magic and Harry Potter (again...may I stress that FANFICTION HAS SUCKED OUT MY SOUL!). Aha! So...BOTH sides have no idea what they're talking about. HeheYoo-jin

Beautiful. It's like talking to yourself, the part of you that you don't want to be there, like looking in a darkened mirror. That 'conversation with yourself', you really captured it here.

O_O That was amazing. As I read I had this picture in my head of someone staring into the mirror. Like having a conversation with one another. O.O I really liked it. The flow was excellant and the whole thing draws you in with the first few lines. - I loved it.

!* Noelle *!

Confusxing but also sort of good to listen to- it reminds me of someone, I'm not certain who...

wow, great peice, i relate to this in a strange way, thank you for sharing