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| Asala 2005-05-18 ch 1,   | Really liked this poem, good word techniques, fav line: 'So later he could drink you dry'. Great subject for a poem, really like it. |
| Rowan MacKenzie 2005-03-31 ch 1, | Wow! This definately describes a love affair with a vampire. I like it...I like it alot! Good job! |
| kori300 2005-03-22 ch 1, | that was great... |
| Sagaciouspnay 2005-02-23 ch 1, | Aw, your dream vampire. Brings tears to my eyes just dreaming of MY vampire ::^_^:: I bet Rafa'll be happy if he sees this :) xox- Rice girl |
| ta1nt3d1uv 2005-02-21 ch 1, | I like it :-) |
| Tutube 2005-02-20 ch 1, | MUAHAHAHA! VAMPIRES RULE ALL! ^.^ Do you read Anne Rice's books? *ahem* anyways! back to your poem . . . I liked it, and thought it was quite well written. . . however *dun dun dun!* the rhyming and rythm could use some improvement. in particular: "and abilities to enter the mind" has a few too many sylables it seems. anyhow, i look forward to more pieces of work from you! keep it up! |
| crysta17 2005-02-20 ch 1, | vampires are definitely sensual...^^ good one! tc and keep writing! ~crysta~ |
| Regina 2005-02-20 ch 1, | Very mysterious and very good. |
| firemounrain 2005-02-20 ch 1, | Actually reminds me of Snape. lol |