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| Spiral Artist 2005-07-18 ch 1, | abuseThis truly IS the story of our lives... |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-03-20 ch 1, | abusei think this is like kinky mixed with horror :D nice! |
| Rara Punk 2005-02-22 ch 1, | abusewow, great imagery. I ate breakfast not too long ago haha. Nah man, this is excelent - I love the sort of story you've built into this as well. Very well written. The second two last line is realy really cool. -write on! |
| Manju 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abusegood job. this is very haunting but still written well. |