Returning the favor for reviewing my piece. Love the poem, but a few things to point out.
Last line: And answer? doesn't make sense...
Also, constant changing with the rhyme, just thought I'd point that out. Besides that, this is an amazing poem. I really like this: Yellow rays are filtered through,//
The bars on windows in this room,
Very descriptive and yet short enough to fit the rest.

yep i 'member this one. great jorb once again! oh, i think i might have a few things posted that you might not have seen yet. R&R peez!

Ooh, wow. That's really good. I don't think I'll ever be able to write about old people until I am one. I think this is just awesome. It's really good. Good job.