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Cass Boothe 2008-04-17 ch 8,	I like the plot. However I would suggest that you re-read your chapters for typos before you post them. They are quite prevalant in all of them and can be distracting.
Tearsofthemoon77 2008-03-08 ch 8,	Write more! It is very interesting, and I like the setting too! I think Dalton is too cute! Keep going! :)
C.Krit 2007-02-24 ch 8,	Wow! I just found this story and it's really good! :-) Please update soon.
Sprkles620 2006-08-08 ch 8,	hope ya update soon, i cant wait to find out who she hook sup with.
Sprkles620 2006-07-27 ch 7,	i really wish you would continue this story, i like it a lot! Please Please finish this story i hate reading sotries that never get finished and it has been happening a lot lately on this website.
Krystal Nickle 2006-05-07 ch 4,	hey, i really like your story. it seems like it is a good plot if a little cliched but still pretty good. the only problem is your grammatical errors. it drives my attention away from the actual story when i concentrate more on all the errors than the story. you should really look in to getting a BETA reader. now, i don't know exactly what the heck that is but i do know that you send them the chapter before posting and they correct any mistakes you might've made. i'm really good in english so i could do it for you if you wanted me to. it's just a suggestion that you don't have to take up if you dont want. but email me and tell me what you think. my email address is cknhtx0502@yahoo.com so yeah. and one other thing. don't beg for reviews unless it is in a joking matter because that actually makes me not want to review. but as you can see, i am anyway because i do like this story and i seriously think it could have a lot of potential. that's all. bye.
evil anjl 2005-07-15 ch 6,	hey! ur story is realli cool...hope u continue riting
Shixa Goddess 2005-04-23 ch 6,	I hope you figure out where you're going soon, this story seems really promising. update soon.
Drowning In Darkness 2005-04-21 ch 6,	Okay yeah I understood it. But at the very end when you changed from where Kamina was to where Keith was with no extracts or something like that it through me off for a little while. But it doesnt matter because I figured it out. And dont feel bad about not updating very swiftly Ive been procrastinating on both of my stories. :gives guilty grin: So its okay I dont care. And Im sorry youre not getting alot of feedback that really sucks my new story hasnt gotten alot either. and i wish for it the success that some have. But oh well Ill update sooner or later. Later probably knowing me lol. Well it was good I liked it, for some reason I want Kamina to fight back more than what she is doing. But it just might not be in her nature which I understand. So ehn it doesnt bother me that badly I still will read the next chapter whenever you get around to it ;-)Rebe
Deafgurl's world 2005-03-25 ch 5,	Wow!Why does the men kidnapped Kamina?How interesting that she caught cold.Wow Nikhil is try to make her warm.I hope she will be okay. Hurry update soon. Is there any dangers or love ahead into Kamina's journey?
Drowning In Darkness 2005-03-25 ch 5,	Its a good chapter and no your not going to fast its fine. Um I dont know Reese is cool and Nikhail has a nice ring to it.
rock 'n' roll junkie 2005-03-22 ch 5,	Nikhil definitely. I like the story.
Ashley 2005-03-19 ch 3,	its a pretty good story...cant wait to continue to read
Penny 2005-03-19 ch 5,	Its the first time i have seen and read your story adn I must say that it is great!
unthinkable 2005-03-19 ch 5,	cool story! i think Kamina should be with Nikhil. please update soon!!

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