Bravo! First time I've seen a poem about the fair, and you pulled it off beautifully. I could feel myself at the local fair, and the imagery was amazing. Could smeel the popcorn, hay, etc. Just a bang up job with this one.
Last line, absolutly perfect.

hey, srry i didnt review sooner cuz i read this a while ago... this is really really great! i miss the fair already! no matter what- me and you have to go, ok?