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Noctame
2006-11-08
ch 6,
abuseAWESOME story! Now update it damnnit! I need to see what happens next!
BeccaBoo14
2006-08-26
ch 6,
abuseOh my gosh. I can't beleive this. I SO wasn't expecting it. I can't BELEIVE THIS. How DARE they! I.. I just... OH MY GOD. HOW DARE THEY?!?!?!?!

I can't beleive this. (I sound like a broken record). I DEFINATELY was NOT expecting that.

I wasn't really expecting that reaction out of her though. I was expecting her to get all ** off and throw a psychic fit or something. And dude, she's in hell, so she could TOTALLY go toruture some stupid soul who got in her way- You know, just to let off some steam...

I love how Satan was so good about it though! I think that the whole anger thing will come back and she's going to befurious once she's done crying and everything. I hope that she doesn't push HIM away though, because right now, he seems to be the only thing that'll permanently be in her life.

This was an awesome update, and I can't really complain about how long it's taken you to update considering most of my stories I havn't updated for about a year, myself.

But It's so awesome to see you finally updating, after all that time. It's definately inspiring me!

And please keep up the updates now, huh? =P Great job!
Shadowed Eyes of an Angel
2006-08-23
ch 6,
abuseThis is really well written and extremely interesting. The concept is wonderful and the plot is well executed. Good job. Update soon.

SEA
Malaine
2006-08-05
ch 6, anon.
abuseGreat! Some editing faux-pas but nothing terrible, the vision was a bit abrupt but that is a style thing, you are allowed to keep your own. Keep going, I like it, it reminds me of some old stuff of mine (subject not mechanics) and that is a nice little memory boost.
DaughterofVlad
2006-08-01
ch 6,
abuseOMG! awesome chapter, irony sucks don't it? Poor Maren
BeccaBoo14
2005-12-12
ch 2,
abuseUgh, damnit, will you update already? you're killing me here!
R.L.K
2005-11-18
ch 5,
abusefound your story...i like it hope you keep on writting more to it
DaughterofVlad
2005-10-20
ch 1,
abuseoh my gosh this is so funny! I love your story! you have givin it and edge its sirious but with hints of humor! This is probably my favorite story that I've read yet! keep up the good work!
BlackFireyPhoenix86
2005-10-14
ch 5,
abusePretty good story... Its good... but one question... How do you get 'Hell' out of 3244?... I get 'Hell' if its 1134... But anyways, Great story...

Can't wait until the next chapter...

Keep up the good work... ^_^
The Hellion
2005-07-26
ch 5,
abuseYou've created a wonderful plot along with intriguing characters. Pardon my girlish tendencies, but Lucifer seems like the ideal dream man in your story. He's mysterious, engaging, and quite humorous. I await whatever your immense imagination throws out in the next update!

-Skye
Deadly-green-snake
2005-07-19
ch 5,
abusemm..wonderful chappie. Getting more exciting...yay! hehe. hmm...maybe Lucifer DOES have a nice side? anyways..update soon!
ScjT
2005-07-17
ch 5, anon.
abuseLove it... update soon pls...
Malaine
2005-07-17
ch 5, anon.
abuseLovely, just lovely. I don't have much time because (long story short) I am catching a plane to France today. I strongly suggest you give The Shard a shot. Love!
BeccaBoo14
2005-07-16
ch 5,
abuseAHAHAH

BWAHAHAHAHA- I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! YOU HAVE NO IDEA! DUDE- YOU NEED SOME, LIKE- SEXUAL TENSION BETWEEN SATAN AND HER XD I'D LOVE TO SEE HOW SHE'D DEAL WITH THAT- IT'D BE SO GREAT- HAHA- I LOVE THIS STORY, ah- very good chappy by the way- lol. UPDATE SON PLEASE?~?~?~?~?!??!!?!!? XD
Vampire Slayer Lee
2005-07-16
ch 5,
abusegood chapter never knew satan could be caring who knew. cant wait for the next one.
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