Kind of disjointed in a way.:D it was good. could be better.:D keep writing.:D

Loved this story, it was great fun to read!

Hmm, your story is really fast-paced, and I love reading fast-paced romantic comedies.

OMG, your character writes your A/N for you?! You're such a unique author.

"Blossomed"? Oh gosh, I guess that the note is nothing more than a joke.

Muahaha, life in high school can be terribly complicated, regardless of one's position on the social pyramid. By the way, that bit about the "to kill" list amuses me.

"Hypothesis: If you force a loser and a jock together in any environment, then disaster will ensue."
Well, I must say that this hypothesis is quite interesting. I bet that Lisa and Brad will have to experience lots of ups and downs before they discover that they're in love. I like the plot so far, even though it's kinda cliche, it doesn't bore me at all.

Let me guess... Is this story about childhood friends that fall in love with each other? Well, that's one of my favourite cliches! :)
((I have never heard of "prison ball" before, but it sounds kinda fun.))

Hahaha well you certainly have a lot of personality!! =]

hehe i love how april take offece to being called Ape. Silly enough my name is April. and I hate that nickname, people always assume that its ok to shorten a perfectly good month to an APE

hehe i like this

Yay! I'm so glad I found this story again! I read it a while ago and didn't review it because I didn't have a FP account. Anyways just wanted to say your awesome, and I love this story! It's one of my favorites on FP. Yayayay!

I think you finished this story about 4 years ago .
But have to tell that I loved it .
I love April ! Bravo ! Wonderful writing ! (:

Okay, when I started this story, I was interested. It was good, it kept me wanting to read more, even though there were a few errors and what not. Basically, I liked everything but the ending. I think it was way too rushed. And you didn't describe the characters well at all. I mean, Brad, who in the end, wasn't even the main male character, was the only one really described to us. While on the other hand, Logan, our main guy here, was shown as a small character nobody really cares about. I didn't learn a single thing about him, and I dont think his feelings for Lisa and vise versa were developed at all. They just...kinda happened at the end of the story somehow... It was just very rushed. I liked the way things were going in the whole story, until I read the end. At this rate, I'd rather have Lisa end up with Brad, because at least we got to know him, while Logan's just a...mystery. TOO much of a mystery, to the point of him not being important. I really think the plot having to do with Lisa and Logan especially should have been more developed. But you are the author, so obviously you'd decide. I'd just like you to know that the rest of the story was very good, and I dont mean to insult you in anyway for the ending, just some constructive criticism. :) Hope it helped.

Wow. I think you just completely covered a person's life in their 'awkward stage'. Lisa has the best train of thought and reasoning.
"I forgave my parents eventually because how was I supposed to get my allowance otherwise?" ftw.
The first kiss scene was adorable and fumbling and confusing like it should be. (:
This made me laugh. "Too bad that wasn’t my name. But hey, if he wanted me to be Leslie, then by God, I’d be Leslie."