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| choc me 2008-07-01 ch 12, | abuseLoL that was great, and so funny. I'm actually sad it's over! I think I'm really gonna miss Brad most of all!! |
| Ambergirl1029 2008-05-29 ch 12, | abuseAmber: this is so awesome i cannot believe i never found this story before, brad is my favorite by far ... no Joseph, you're not included...(LOL) |
| BluePillow75 2008-04-25 ch 12, | abuseNaw! How cute ^ And funny! Laughed my ** of many times ;) |
| Genato 2008-03-22 ch 12, | abuseit was funny. and weird. but good. :D |
| x3life 2008-03-18 ch 12, | abuseaw this was a really cute and funny story =) |
| The Weird One 2008-03-13 ch 5, anon. | abuseI don't get it. She's supposed to act like his girlfriend so that they can 'study' the reaction of everyone else. But when Brad askes her to do something (like go to a party) she purposly refuses to do it o_O. Isn't she supposed to say yes to everything and study stuff x_x |
| Moonlit Promise 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseOh...Her life sucks... Haha. I like it so far. |
| A 2008-03-02 ch 2, anon. | abuseI like your story so far, but I just wanted to point out that you have some tense issues. I guessed it was the second but I decided not to comment. “So who are you with?” I ask. “Oh, don’t remind me, it’s Margaret.” She whines and I laugh, glad that I’m not the only one stuck with an awful partner for this lab. “Yes, real mature Lisa, kick me when I’m down. Go ahead, laugh. Just wait, I’ll get an A plus on this lab by just showing up at her house every few days.” You switched into present tense there. |
| Cheezieball 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuselol. That's all I can remember xD Funny stuff ^_^ |
| SparklingStar25 2007-12-30 ch 12, | abusethis was cute!! |
| YouHadxMe 2007-11-25 ch 12, | abuseThis story was insanely adorable! I love Brad, and the scene where Brad and Lisa were supposed to break up but everyone got so confused! :D so cutee. I wish there were more scenes between Lisa and Logan though, it would've helped the development of the story. but all in all it was soo cute and i really enjoyed it. |
| wake of beauty 2007-11-22 ch 12, | abuseI love the a/n type things. xD |
| Unholy Confessions 2007-11-03 ch 7, anon. | abuseI really don't think you should have went by a voting decision, democracy rocks, but not in writing. You should have went on which pairing works better together, Logan/Lisa seem like it would be rush together as Brad/Lisa can flow perfectly fine. Maybe that's just my author views clouding my judgements. But anyway, I love Brad, his personality is wonderful. Logan seems a bit... too good for me. Like all hail the guy who's shiny and golden, prince charming, he's perfect and there's not an ounce of wrongness within him. God.. I hate those guys. Hopefully Logan will grow on me, I cannot hate 1/2 of the main couple. Chapter 11 Review: Just finish reading that and the whole extremely rushed April/Brad pairing killed this story for me. They only had like a 1 or 2 good scenes together that might lead up to a pairing in oh so, chapter 20! Sorry, I tried to give it a chance. The description and grammar was perfect, your chacters were developed nicely, but your pairings were off and undeveloped. And since this story is built around couples, them being so terrible killed the story. |
| kingrankar76 2007-10-31 ch 12, | abuseAww i love Brad and April. That girl has got spunk |
| Stylo 2007-09-27 ch 12, | abuseI love this story!! It's so short and sweet:). I've seen it around forever on FP but I've never read it cause the title and summary seemed too YA/angsty. But it is so not, and I feel stupid for thinking so in the first place. Yes, Bradley rules. :). The Author's Notes (or rather, B/Ns) were amazing. Ever considered getting checked for split personality disorder? :P Anyhow, excellent work. Going on favourites for sure. ~*Bambam*~ |