Col!

I almost wonder if this belongs at fanfiction.net. But, I suppose I wouldn't have found it there.

I suppose I'm only confused as to whether the parts in italics are just excerpts from the book; but in a way that's cool, because it means I can't tell the difference between C.S. Lewis' writing and yours! w00t!

Keep up the good work.

Aw. This was lovely, Raven.