this is beautiful piece, very very well written, you can tell a lot of effort went inot writing this piece, it flows beautifully and just almost jumps off the page at you, great work, really, thank you for sharing, and good luck with the submission!

Aw that was so sweet! I loved it - During the whole thing I was like 'Wow...what a person.' And then the ending! Yay!

Wow. That is amazing. I really really liked it...no I loved it.

i liek this alot, and i made a few corrections to my Abandoned and decieved maybe you could check it out, i tried to make it like i was talking about someone else, but i appreciate your review thanx and keep up the good work

wow. this is awesome. i'd say scratch the roman numerals and just have like a border of stars (*) or sumthin. this is really good, let me know how the contest goes..oh yeah can you plz r&r my poem Life through the eyes of an Angel? itz kinda important