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Reviews For: Illusion of Memories

Nocturne Namiax
2005-02-22
ch 1,
abuseThat was a wonderful, dark poem. You have real talent. Thanks for reviewing my story; good-bye.
bkwy
2005-02-22
ch 1,
abuseehh? the last line was poignantly written... alot of emotions went into this one.

one of the best i've ever seen. good job. =)

hey btw, hope is one of the strongest things that can keep us strong when the times get hard. but if anything, i'll be there for u. k? =)
matapokker
2005-02-22
ch 1,
abusei like the twist, and she rises above all! angsty but the twist makes it so much less.

but i think the switching between I and her makes one confused about the point of view. it's up to you (:

your tracker jie here btw! go see mine haha.
VampireWinter
2005-02-21
ch 1,
abuseI can totally relate! but anyway, i am sure i made it obvious that i am fond of this poem. Well written and well said. Everything was clear and perfect. You really put your heart and soul into this one. Please continue posting. This is one of the best i have read so far. Keep it up.
Jessicka-scab
2005-02-21
ch 1,
abuseThis is a very beautiful poem, and I can really empathise with you on practically every line. I adore the last line especially. I s'pose you just have to keep on surviving.
Vampyre Dork
2005-02-21
ch 1,
abuseWoah, that was some poem! Lots of twist and turns and emotions flying everywhere! I'm really loving it! Well done!
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