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| Nemonus 2006-07-27 ch 1,  | abuseCool! Very realistic and, well, nice. You get this feeling that people want in especially the first, second, and fiffth stanzas. Lines I like: " think it's good we're a young nation;/we don't have that much history to study;/imagine if we were china./though we've been together since aeons ago,/picking up saga seeds outside the school gate" and "we are just schoolgirls,/twin telepaths,/lip-synching the national anthem". |
| xo-lilacsxandxlolita-ox 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is great. I thought I've reviewed this before, but then, I've always got this Alzheimer's complex, and I keep on forgetting when and who I have reviewed. Everything in your words is entrancing and absorbs the reader in with your poetic worlds. Nothing short of brilliance, if not genius. chibichocobo |
| negligible fictional force 2005-03-28 ch 1, | abuseall right, so tell me which are the hard words, and i'll oblige in the explanation. -kismet. |
| Me 2005-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think your poem is so complicated i cant read a single word of it without having to jump around with a dictionary on my head trying to absorb words from it. Try to stop cramming all the adjectives you have learned if your lifetime into one poem its very complicated and bloody hard to read. Try it. |
| moonarised polane 2005-03-28 ch 1, | abuseyayness mellya! this is for me! haha. whope! haha. i am stressing out and totally freaked out. eks. anyway, this is personal and rather amusing really. thank you girl. and duhh, the cd was WOW. haha. |
| I C U 2 2005-03-08 ch 1, | abusevery very nice, I like this a lot |
| KonekOniko 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abusereminds me of me and kristy, we end up saying the same thing and the same time. heh, this poem is so personal yet not so much so that others could relate...love it! |
| Cyssel 2005-02-25 ch 1, | abuseNow this isan interesting piece. I think you've brought outall that wasneeded.Nice imagery used.Definitely a veryemotional,heartfeltand personal poem,of which you've evoked the emotionsquite well. |
| Ohmm 2005-02-24 ch 1, | abusegoing on my favorites. like what the others say, this is personal but yet captures everybody's memories.wonderful-! |
| reicheruuu! 2005-02-22 ch 1, anon. | abusehahass. that was so cute melly =) mm. yeah imagine if we were china. > |
| Chi Ame 2005-02-21 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. You have a way of making things humourous and beautiful at the same time. I love it, and your use of wording is... amazing, as usual! |
| Made in U.S.A. 2005-02-21 ch 1, | abuseYay you posted again! This is beautiful and personal yet relative to alot of people so it's not that personal. you know? Anyway great job and keep writing :D |
| linaeve 2005-02-21 ch 1, | abusebeautiful beautiful beautiful. captures the loveliness of friendship so perfectly & eloquently. i wish i could bottle this and send it off as 'essence of friendship'. i'd be a rich girl. ;) -lin |
| Ayumiko 2005-02-21 ch 1, | abuseThat's really sweet, hehe, funny theme for the title too! ^_^ |
| catseyeview 2005-02-21 ch 1, | abuseI love this, so personal but yet not! everyone can tap into their own best friends reading this, nice work! |