I like the feel of this, the flow of it is very strong and the way that it 'beats' is something that I find interesting.

Keep it up.

Wow, really, really nice. I like it.

man, I love your vocabulary. It gives it suck variety. KEEP WRITING! And thatz a demand )

very good! i like your last line...s. nice work; i look forward to reading more of your writing.

Whoa alex, very powerful indeed. Nice-Keith Andrew

wow.. this is great, i really like it!

love you, zai

Wow.

Well. I believe in the devil and stuff, so I think you did a great job on this.

It's so true too.

Good job. Good poem.

Much Love-Suicdial_Greeting

This is great i love the imagery and the truth of it. lots of love in return Jessa

Wow. Horribly vibrant imagery. (Bubbling skin) Nice flow to it, and thanks for the reviews.

this is really good _

realy good, with lots of petic influence in there! love it!

oh that was positively awesome. the rhyming was great, something i can hardly ever do, and the idea and the structure of this poem was great. good describtion and imagry, wha hoo it's on my favourites!