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| CovinS 2005-02-24 ch 1,  | abuseThe poem accurrately communicates a feeling that many people, i assume, can relate to: the dysfunctional relationship that we have with God. There's so much we don't understand about Him because we're never ready to listen; we beg for answers and then *say* He doesn't give them, but really we're not listening. I think this really communicates that. While it's a little bit of a cliche/stereotpyical, it's better than the majority. |
| sto1c 2005-02-21 ch 1, anon. | abusedamn those ORANGES AND TATORS..*shakes head* *KIDNAPS U* haha.. |