Hehehe nifty, she has my b-day ^_^. Despite what you say, I think this is really good. Though it does have its awkward bits, mainly where the flow of the peice stutters. GAH I hate the format change fictionpress went through -- I can SEE that there was a format here, but I'm having trouble picking it out. In any case, I think it'd be stronger if the stanzas were visible. Maybe you could update and fix them or something? Hmm. Great job, anyway =).

chochang913

very true.. I lvoe you make such a depressing poem.. be happy becuase of the friendship it really shows how much you care for her

this is beautiful. i love your writings so much. and youve captured life problems so well too!

*tears up a little* sho beauteefull

I have no flames :puts away lighter :P : This is what it's supposed to be. It's heartfelt, it's sincere, it's sweet, and really a thoughtful present. Good job Kassia. lol