Rather depressing, but good. Keep writing: the only problem with your poems is that you don't write them fast enough!

Xavier

beautiful & pwoerful.. love the title

The imagery is stunningly vivid in this, and though the diction and such were all great, that's what stands out the most. Excellent, excellent work. I love it.

Powerful, and so sad. Your imagery is great as usual, and your word choice makes the agony of this person really intense and palpable for the reader. Great job.

;__; Beautiful...So sad and touching you left me crying. It's so sad and bitter sweet. ^^; Great job once again!! ^-^ Never stop writing. =D

!~* Noelle *~!

chrysalis,—butterfly prison,

she must find her way out of it,

day's maze would make all feel dazed,

importunities all ends block,

until mind finds its key release,

to fashion future on gold wings,

& fly to Mexico's mountains,

where worshippers to Monarch's bow.