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Xavier Everett 2005-05-06 . chapter 1
Rather depressing, but good. Keep writing: the only problem with your poems is that you don't write them fast enough!

Xavier
simpleplan13 2005-04-01 . chapter 1
beautiful & pwoerful.. love the title
Anjeni Windsinger 2005-03-31 . chapter 1
The imagery is stunningly vivid in this, and though the diction and such were all great, that's what stands out the most. Excellent, excellent work. I love it.
Eirien 2005-03-05 . chapter 1
Powerful, and so sad. Your imagery is great as usual, and your word choice makes the agony of this person really intense and palpable for the reader. Great job.
poetic abortion 2005-02-21 . chapter 1
;__; Beautiful...So sad and touching you left me crying. It's so sad and bitter sweet. ^^; Great job once again!! ^-^ Never stop writing. =D

!~* Noelle *~!
Manuel Fajar 2005-02-21 . chapter 1
chrysalis,—butterfly prison,

she must find her way out of it,

day's maze would make all feel dazed,

importunities all ends block,

until mind finds its key release,

to fashion future on gold wings,

& fly to Mexico's mountains,

where worshippers to Monarch's bow.
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