I miss your writing.. bring us something new to savour, its been a long time.

mezzie

Wow, this is just amazing. This is one of those poems that is open to so much interpretation. "and it’s running to, not away from—"

*rediscovers fp* I love the "higher plateau than the stumbling valleys" line.

Interesting little poem you have here...you okay?I like your blatant symbolism with the flatlined.

...yep.

Hey, I think I actually understood that! On the first/second time through, even. I absolutely love the first line, it's just so true and hilarious at the same time. w00t for understandable poetry!~avidelecteur

The second to last line confused me a little but I love how you use the image of high plateus and low valleys and you talk about keeping up appearences because it seems like people do that alot and I know I am guily of doing that.

Good job. It's a very deep poem. Keep up the good work.