amazing story i must say. as to why? Intelegent smart and more realistic then most stories speceliy slash stories I liked the charcters so teenage like...The story I mean.
Keep writing

Niall is so dense! Everything was so obvious! Hahaha... Maybe that's what makes him cute.
My favorite character was Donovan, followed by Adrian, so I'm gonna go for the second book to see if there is any hope for Don and if Brad is good enough for Adrian :P
I also really suspect something between Jesse and Keith :D

I really want Niall and Don to end up together but I get the feeling that Niall and Luke will =(

Love the story.

Like this story very much, I do.
Enthralled, I was.
Going to read book two, I am.

I absolutely love this story. Your characters are intriguing and multi-dimensional. And what in the world happened to Luke's face? Poor guy. I'm going to guess his father...I've gotten the distinct impression that his father isn't of the fatherly sort.

Spencer from the previous chapter creeped me out...and Will creeped me out for simply associating with Spencer. Why do I get this feeling that we'll see Spencer again?

What's up with Donovan? He's back to being quiet. I'm going to guess either he had a bad end to the summer or...or...he's found out about Niall's sexuality...though I wouldn't know how he'd find out about it.

-Sunne

I love it all the way. I can't believe Niall was so dense as to not see everyone was gay. xD Lovely.

So, I'm interested at the hints you've already dropped in this chapter. I mean, Xander Blaire already gets a mention and he doesn't really appear for a good while, does he?

It's fun rereading this again. I keep noticing things I hadn't before, even though this is only the first chapter. Oh well, at least it's interesting again since I haven't read this for a while. Be glad that you've created something that is easing an insomniac's boredom XD

Love you Erica xx

Hey, just a few questions. These boys are thirteen, no? The way you're writing them it sounds like they're about three years older at least. Sex when you're thirteen? I'm sure that there are people who do have it at thirteen. Still that just sounds a bit off to me, but then again I more than a little naive.
On a different note, I love the way you write and your characterization. Both of those seem really well planned and thought out.

Hey just wanted to let you know that... I REALLY LOVED THIS! Everyone loves Donovan, heh. Yay! -prances around-

This is an amazing story! It has a wonderful plot and you can't help but love the characters. Keep up the good work!

I really liked this. I'm just not entirly sure why Kevin was expelled. Or did he just leave because of what happend? If he was expelled then it was because he's gay? Hm...

In the begining I really wanted Niall to end up with Don. I still think they'd be cute together... I wonder if in the sequel he'll end up with someone.

I loved this! I'm grinning like a Cheshire Cat right now- I'm so happy! I have to admit, partway through that I really did want Niall to hook up with Donovan (and ah...what is it with the Americans and British accents? It will always amaze me) but by the end of this Niall and Luke just seemed so right together. And 'sweet, dense' Niall would be particularly accurate- of course Luke and Adrian were together! Anyway, on to the next Book!

hey, I loved your story! I just read it all, but forgot to review, so I came back. I read this so that I could read book two, so there I'll be, Bye! Great Job!

I like this. ^^ I'm procrastinating, so I'm going to start the next one.

Donovan's the best.