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Princess of Lies 2008-07-14 ch 10,	abuseArgh. MRIs are probably the most annoying things ever. I had to redo mine with a slight sedative because I had a panic attack partway through. I was eight years old and in third grade. Imagine an eight year old having to lie still in a small tube for over an hour!
dolly-dear 2006-12-25 ch 18,	abuseAhem, yes. I hate you. Well, no, but I hate this ending. It should die and burn up and be eaten by rabid bunnies. DIE! I need to learn to accept these sad endings, there seems to be an abundance of them. Now that I look at the genre, I see it says tragedy. I need to pay more attention to that... Now I'm going to be depressed for a few days, and I have you to thank! Anyways. I love everything about this. Yes, even the ending to a certain extent, because it's just so awesome! The characters were wonderful and really developed. And I think I'd be pretty ** off too if I wound up in some strange place with people who wanted me to be a lab rat... ::Cough:: Well, I love this. Along with anything else you write.
wtf? 2006-09-08 ch 18, anon.	abuseman, i was so going to put this onto my fav's list, but the ending REALLY blew! seriously, wtf? if i had known it'd end like that, i wouldn't have wasted my time reading it!
BlackPhoenixRising 2006-07-28 ch 18,	abuseDecent writing writing. The previous chapter's carnage was pretty unexpected- what made you want to make it that dark? interesting thought though. a (slightly) dissapointed reader
Azamir 2006-07-08 ch 18, anon.	abuseThis is quite a cruel ending. I'll rean Karayan's story soon, maybe tomorrow or something, but... T_TPoor Ciaran. Losing everything like that... Of course he attempted suicide twice. Anyways, it was written amazingly, so much suspense in the parts concerning the final battle, and it's rather a difference to read something that doesn't have a happy ending. Though I would really have wished for Ciaran to get one... sigh I think I'm getting quite addicted to your original stuff as well. I started reading Yaoi on some german original fiction pages, and only with jrock I really got into fanfiction... it's just that I was runnig out of seriously good stories in german, but now i think I have a new source of original fiction...^^ I wish I could write stuff with so much suspense in it. you're just a wonderful writer. thank you for making your work available to everyone all over the world! Aza^^
kyominx 2006-06-27 ch 18, anon.	abusehiya, kyo again well this was a real depressing story! every one DIES!! WAH!... ok i'm good. it had a really good plot-line and the characters were put together really well. it was an unexpected ending, but their mission was kinda a suicide run. i was glad that tristan and ciaran could at least be with someone they loved before tristan died and ciaran went over the edge. and then those stupid people want to start all over agin with the psychic project? i hope marie gets really powerful and incinerates all of them, mwahahahahahahaha! i haven't read karayan's little story yet, don't know if i really want to... the little biotch... anyways, good story, now i'm gonna go review another one, sigh kyominx
Liviania 2006-05-26 ch 18,	abuseInteresting story...but very sad ending. Still, not everything can end happy. Livi
ddz008 2006-05-14 ch 18,	abuseYou're so mean! Everyone had a bad end or are dead! T_T I can't believe it. So everybody is Dead except Ciaran? That's so sad and awful. :( It was a great story but the ending was so sad. Great job.
n. 2005-10-24 ch 18, anon.	abuseamazing story! i love how you connected it to real-life scenarios like the people in psych wards. those who don't want to be touched, those who think the government is after them, etc. it gives one theory of an explanation and i love how they seem sane and it's actually the government and its lackeys who are insane. thanks for the great story.
Inherent 2005-09-29 ch 18,	abuseThis was VERY good. But the ending. Oh dear. So horrible. Not the writing, but what happend.
Seque Me ad Meum Somnium 2005-09-26 ch 18,	abuseYou.are.an.evil.person.you.should.die.right.now. YOu know what? bad things will happen to you...forever...you will never recover...you will be hunted by evil penguins...i hate you...you are evil...you are nto a nice person...ah!...you need help..serious phycological help...right now...i'm serious...i'll call my phyciatrists and you can have and appointement...then i'll buy you a straight jacket...you will never be permeitted to write again...evil evil little person!
Coin Operated Pencil 2005-09-08 ch 18,	abuseOh Goodness . . . that was, perhaps, the most heart wrenching story I've ever read before in my life. The way you made me fall in love with the characters, then killed them all so horribly. Yes, yes, I know this is a tragedy, but that was way over what I expected! Give a gal some warning next time . . . way in advance so I could have prepared myself for their deaths. ^_~ Wonderful job though. It was written very well, and I must admit that, although I did cry my heart out at the end and was looked at by my sister as crazy for it, I enjoyed reading it. I find it rather difficult and time consuming trying to find good original stories to read, as I've read most of the good ones, but I was pleasantly surprised by this one. This story will be put onto my favorites list, just because of how great it was. This story was, in all honesty, an emotional rollercoaster. C'est tres bien! Keep writing (perhaps you could make some other stories with happy endings? Just as a little bonus for your loyal fans out there that love the way you write but dislike the terrible sadness that comes with it . . .) Now then, I believe I shall go read the rest of your stories, don't be surprised if you here from me again sometime. ^_^ I review the stories I like best, so your other stories will more then likely get a review out of me as well. Au revoir,Lady Lottie
Silver Daratraz 2005-07-13 ch 17,	abusedon't you just love dark endings.
Silver Daratraz 2005-07-12 ch 9,	abusewhat just happened?
Amber003 2005-07-09 ch 18,	abuseOk wow, this whole story has been amazing, but the ending...seriously, you totally out-did yourself. All the details you had worked in are just amazing. I'm a big fan of pretty much all your stuff, but the ending of this one is for sure one of the best. Like I said, I've read pretty much all your stuff. You could have a serious writing career ahead of you. You're heads above many published authors out there and you're only 15?!?! That means the only thing you stand to do is get better! Once again, amazing job!

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