It's just... over? :( I'm sad. I loved the story very much though!

Wow... I loved this- except for the ending! I nearly cried! Did it really have to end that way? Occasionally it felt as if you dealt with some of the other characters too briefly, but other than that, it was brilliant :D

Interesting story well written characters generally and an good plot with a good take on the whole physic abilities idea. The only thing is I was a bit disappointed with the ending, sometimes just tragically killing off most the characters feels like a bit of a let down, to me it also felt a bit abrupt maybe? thank you anyway though for an enjoyable read

Wow...that was incredibly depressing. Sadly I think most of the best stories have depressing endings. Personally I'm a happy-ending girl. I was all ready for them to go in there and for Ciaran to find out that he absorb not parts of people's emotions (ie Dante's tiredness), but also parts of their powers and then kick K's **. Or start yelling things at K about how K ** up his relationship with Tristan and how now he's gunna die alone and have K get ** and drop his shields enough for Dante and Tristan to knock him out with a couple well-placed attacks.

I'm so down now.

I think I'm gunna have to go into emo-mode for a couple weeks now *depressed sigh* ...



Anyways, great story (sob-ending and all)
~Miranda

Please tell me you'll make a sequal. I feel so bad for Ciaran, and dante and the others it's just so sad. Please tell me He recovers and saves the little girl. Awesom fic by the way.

"It was deep, but played out like in and elegant way, like a cello perfectly tuned and played by the most skilled musician."
I love this descrpition! As a musician myself, I find it amazing!! (as I sit at my computer desk with a trumpet, clarinet, flute, saxophone, and oboe, that I play between each page load...)
Lee

I never noticed until now how similar the names Ciaran and Karayan sound. I thought that was interesting.

Forgive me for saying so, but this story seems kind of pointless, like many Shakespearian tragedies where everyone dies. I still enjoy reading it though, and it's very well written.

Argh. MRIs are probably the most annoying things ever. I had to redo mine with a slight sedative because I had a panic attack partway through. I was eight years old and in third grade. Imagine an eight year old having to lie still in a small tube for over an hour!

Ahem, yes. I hate you. Well, no, but I hate this ending. It should die and burn up and be eaten by rabid bunnies. DIE! I need to learn to accept these sad endings, there seems to be an abundance of them. Now that I look at the genre, I see it says tragedy. I need to pay more attention to that... Now I'm going to be depressed for a few days, and I have you to thank!

Anyways. I love everything about this. Yes, even the ending to a certain extent, because it's just so awesome! The characters were wonderful and really developed. And I think I'd be pretty ** off too if I wound up in some strange place with people who wanted me to be a lab rat... ::Cough::

Well, I love this. Along with anything else you write.

man, i was so going to put this onto my fav's list, but the ending *REALLY* blew! seriously, wtf? if i had known it'd end like that, i wouldn't have wasted my time reading it!

Decent writing writing. The previous chapter's carnage was pretty unexpected- what made you want to make it that dark? interesting thought though.

a (slightly) dissapointed reader

This is quite a cruel ending. I'll rean Karayan's story soon, maybe tomorrow or something, but... T_TPoor Ciaran. Losing everything like that... Of course he attempted suicide twice.

Anyways, it was written amazingly, so much suspense in the parts concerning the final battle, and it's rather a difference to read something that doesn't have a happy ending. Though I would really have wished for Ciaran to get one... *sigh*

I think I'm getting quite addicted to your original stuff as well. I started reading Yaoi on some german original fiction pages, and only with jrock I really got into fanfiction... it's just that I was runnig out of seriously good stories in german, but now i think I have a new source of original fiction...^^

I wish I could write stuff with so much suspense in it. you're just a wonderful writer. thank you for making your work available to everyone all over the world!

Aza^^

hiya, kyo again

well this was a real depressing story! every one DIES!! WAH!... ok i'm good. it had a really good plot-line and the characters were put together really well. it was an unexpected ending, but their mission was kinda a suicide run.

i was glad that tristan and ciaran could at least be with someone they loved before tristan died and ciaran went over the edge. and then those stupid people want to start all over agin with the psychic project? i hope marie gets really powerful and incinerates all of them, mwahahahahahahaha!

i haven't read karayan's little story yet, don't know if i really want to... the little biotch...

anyways, good story, now i'm gonna go review another one, *sigh*

kyominx

Interesting story...but very sad ending. Still, not everything can end happy.

Livi

You're so mean! Everyone had a bad end or are dead! T_T I can't believe it. So everybody is Dead except Ciaran? That's so sad and awful. :( It was a great story but the ending was so sad. Great job.