Reviews for Universal Desire - FictionPress.com

The Un-great-ful 2005-04-06 ch 1,	abuseHa! The curse of the day. the contamination of that which provides us with vitamin D obviously we cry under it's yawning gape.
simpleplan13 2005-04-01 ch 1,	abusevery interesting
tehrave 2005-02-21 ch 1,	abuseI understand the last line; it's so magnificent. All of it, in fact. Simple, but endlessly deep. +favourite
dustytiger 2005-02-21 ch 1,	abusegreat peice, very powerful, i like it a lot, thank you for sharing
TrueToMyself 2005-02-21 ch 1,	abusehmm... This is a very thought-provoking poem. It is tough to understand the first time its read. However, I reread it and with just a bit of thought I understood it more. You have a great idea behind this poem here! I don't really see the significance of the last line, though... Overall: fantastic and uncliche; keep writing!
lovelikeamixtape 2005-02-21 ch 1,	abuseIt was an intriguing, beautiful poem up until the last line.. it didn't seem to fit and seemed an unnecessary explanation. Otherwise, good work.