Why do you write what is in my head? I say all of this in the most wonderful sort of way. Death is evident and beautiful in your works, and I wish to tap into your brain and steal some of your genius. I think I am in love with your words.

oh! very good -kisses you- come read my poem/story "Hello" it deals w/ some of the same stuff as "...pedophile"

Love this, great job!!

That was really powerful drawing such a dark picture of something so many people endure. I like this one especially how easily it reads.

it could be a song i loved it Keep writing :)

anotheroh-so-angsty, yet lovely, cutting poem. your cutting poems seem to deal with communication or lack their of, and you write it well that way. nicely done.

I like the "suicide wrist red" lines; it's disjointed and darkly beautiful.

Wow, this is amazing! You did such a good job with this, it's so powerful. I really love the first two lines, they are so awesome and such a great opening. I can really relate to this poem, you're such a great writer. You are so going on my Favourite Authors! :)

gawd I love ur writings. I really like the way u can write doen something so unique. "Painting me a lovely shade of dead."

Gawd, I couls never think of somethin like that, it's hard to explain, i may sound like a freak to ya. lol, anyway, keep it up, I love ur stuff, ur on my favorites now. :)

wow. that is the most powerful poem...the emotion is soo pure and you can feel it as you read it. its the best suicidal type of poem ive read for a LONG time.

keep writing. it helps to find the strength to push forward

'make me feel sereneity when all is revealed so easy to look back in life and question but i must find the strength to push forward" - killswitch engage.

alwaysFTT

(heh..if i forgot words in the lyrics its because im having an off day.)

Really like the corus line in this poem. Very good rhyme and sound especialy the 'lovely shade of dead'.

The image 'Suicide wrist red' is absolutely brilliant - it can be anything from white (scarring) to bloody red to angry pinks.

The problem for me is with cliches like 'Cracked up to be' you diminish the wonderful images that you create in the poem.

Really good work though :)

...Wow...That was really good. O.o ^-^

!~* Noelle *~!

Aya! I love it! I love the last and first part especially, cuz it describes suicide so well! Yer the best poet I know, with kitty, Ti-ti XP.

With lovely adoration and fandom!Ali