wow. speechless. in a similar situation with a friend of mine. it's amazing how it fuels writing, isn't it? So i guess they do serve their purpose...but a purpose that bites that they have to serve, eh?

The reader can really see how you feel about the situation. you might want to find some way to separate the differnt parts of the poem without the distracting thin gray lines.

really good, and i know how that feels...lol