this has to be my favorite piece on this site- from the first time i read it to now i've found nothing to rival it. great, great work.

nice metahpors

That part about the match was like.. whoa.

ahh! kiley! write faster.. it's wicked

Funny. Like to see the humor in this 'story'. Keep writing.

Beautiful. Short and very expressive.

Interesting ending. Your mention of flowers reminds me of roses... how expensive they are, yet everyone gets them, so they somehow become plain.

The part about the match got me the most. Great job on this. Really.

hey at least it's somebody... and id on't mind rumpled, ripped, slightly tattered denim, goofy-grinned boys.. hey.. i even liked one of those.. P

i hope she notices!

how do you do it? lila is like so cool.. well with the little that i know of her.. amazing.. and onto the next one. D

go go go go.. haha i'm excited.. this is wicked.. i'm ready to roll..