Reviews for The Governess and the Gentleman

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Written 2008-03-24 ch 24,	what a sweet story! I feel like you may have rushed it in parts with more telling than showing, and there was the purple prose at the very start that was somewhat noticeable (which, I suppose, was too MUCH showing?). Nevertheless, you pulled through and for the majority of the time your prose was natural and clear, and I had a good image in my head of what was going on. This is one of the better stories I've read on this site, to be honest. I think it was a good gesture how you didn't have her accept the proposal right away; it shows good sense. I think you've done a lovely job! good work :)
Written 2008-03-23 ch 16,	haha, one track mind with the candy, those girls have.
Written 2008-03-23 ch 15,	oh my! I think that was mostly Dan's fault for not giving a heads up...
Written 2008-03-23 ch 14,	it's going wonderfully so far! can't wait to read more :) hope it all ends well.
Written 2008-03-23 ch 1,	what a lovely story! you had a bit too much purple prose at the start, but you got me by the end. I can't wait to read more.
Winterbirdie 2008-01-08 ch 24,	very good story!! =D i love reading stories that are well developed and just great!! Thanks so much!
cinnamon-24 2007-10-31 ch 24,	Aww! That was way aweseome! Great job!
cinnamon-24 2007-10-31 ch 16,	I "might" if ...introduces herself! hehehe! I like Andrew... do set him up with someone nice won't you
cinnamon-24 2007-10-31 ch 14,	Mariah... Your pots boiling over.
cinnamon-24 2007-10-31 ch 13,	No!
cinnamon-24 2007-10-31 ch 8,	That is quite possibly the most endering thing I've seen er read all week!
cinnamon-24 2007-10-31 ch 7,	Yuck! I hope I never get proposed to like that!
cinnamon-24 2007-10-31 ch 5,	Aw This is soo cute! IT's like a shorter Jane Eyre
cinnamon-24 2007-10-31 ch 3,	hehehe! I like her!
cinnamon-24 2007-10-31 ch 2,	WHow! Me gusta!

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