i'm really happy with the way you ended your story. :)

I HATE U! I actually cried at the end lol =P this story was really good, but I think my heart literally broke into 10 peices at the end. Im going to check if you put a sequel.

This story left me with an indescribable feeling of dread.

It almost makes me afraid of reading any more stories on fiction press for fear they will end like this one did.

Your unimaginably cruel.

I hate when stories end like this because It makes you feel like everything the character (in this case James) has said and done up until that point was a lie... and that their original feelings were shallow.

It feels like I've been deceived.

have you lost your mind?THEY DIDNT GET BACK TOGETHER?AND WHATS THIS ** ABOUT 'CLOSUR'THEY ARE SOUL MATES THEY SHOULD OF GOTTEN TOGETHER!

what. the . fu-c-k.? ...

um please tell me this is some horrible cruel joke?! DEAR GOD WHY?!


anyhu - moving on, i cant understand how evan would get closure from that, it was more like rejection. kinda. but anyway i DID enjoy reading this story, your a good writer. But...i just wish james would have had a different attitude towards evan in the future. o well, i really like stories with sad endings anyway. even if i do get peeved off at them.

waah thats horrid! omg but u could totally do a sequel where they meet up in the not to distant future or something!.

god wat a douchebag! me like james no more! i hope he rots in hell. i mean geez couldnt he have refused and said no, while pronouncing his undying love for evans! who cares about his career or that he might go to jail?!! not me, thats for sure! god how mortifying to have your mother witness passionate s-e-x between u and ur lover. simply traumatising.

OMG! THAS FU-C-KING SCARY! WAT THE HECK! WHO IS THIS PEEPING TOM?! ah i must find out!

isnt that just DANDY! trust them to turn dessert into something s-e-x-ual. tsk tsk. well i suppose you should let them dwell in bliss while they can.

aw its a sad chapter. and wow 12 is so young to have s-e-x. my best friend had s-e-x when she was 13, it didnt seem like such a deal back then, cos u feel kinda old/mature wen ur 12/13, at least we did. but when you grow up and think back on it you realise...ugh its just seriously...really way to young. poor evan, he definitely matured too fast. and poor james! aw man poor everyone!

ok im starting to assume im completely wrong with my whole rape-dad fingy, pooey. woe is me.

kinky :)

wow i dint know that thing about alexander the great and Bagoas. i only knew about him and uh wats his name "hesp...blablabla yeah that guy, the one jared leto plays in the movie. wah! so sad when he died in it! sniff* anyway, i bet evan was raped by his dad! if im totally wrong, then...oh well.

jaw drops* dear lordy lord. i was not expecting that! i thought it would be like two sentences of them having s-e-x, but lol, a whole chapter!. blushes* giggles* nosebleed* god i feel like such a dork. but good chapter. erm cough. you must have a lot of experience. ;)

yay! i love it when the POV changes.woho