Wow... it was long, but never once did I get bored of it... I kept wanting to read it more... over and over. You wrote your feelings out very well. Told a story with so many meanings, but one main one. It was a very beautiful poem. You have a lot of talent. I wish I could write as well as you! Your style is so different, not many people write that way, nowadays!

really deep...i couldn't tell all my emotions like that. ~love is all you need~ and pain is all we get

I love it. I love the bitterness of it, I love the feeling of it, I simply altogether LOVE it.