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j??? 2008-08-01 . chapter 1
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the naked civil servant 2005-08-27 . chapter 1
what’s good for you always burns on the way down.

(stop.)

that is the most intelligent thing she can say in the situation.

honey, here i am condescending and i say your policy of appeasement doesn’t satisfy

leaving em hanging and pressing repeatend lifeend life with a semi colon.

OH MY ** GOD YOU ARE A GENIUS.
mostly water 2005-05-24 . chapter 1
Oh...oh my god. I love you.
do not resuscitate 2005-02-23 . chapter 1
this was brilliant. i loved the beginning. "polka dot discrimination/ so i suppose i’ll have to shave my legs tonight/{sweet liberation}/but i won’t comment on our Starbucks nation." this is the best poem i've read on this site in a long time.
wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-02-22 . chapter 1
you can't stop amazing me, can you? seriously.

"end life with a semicolon;""patience is a virtue, and i'm coming home."

what words does one say to that? I'm writing more crappy poetry by the day but you just keep improving and improving, as if you ever could! Gah!
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