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HHHHHHH 2005-05-02 . chapter 1
Yeah, breaking one's head affects a very nice meaning here. It's an articulate statement of opinion, too, especially because they adjudged Czolgosz sane and executed him. I know the feeling of looking at one of society's 'demons' and not seeing one. I enjoyed this poem very much!
do not resuscitate 2005-02-23 . chapter 1
'oh Leon wouldn’t you be my friend?/i think you’d be my friend./such a nice boy you broke your head i guess.' damn, is there anything about this that isn't perfect? i love it.
wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-02-22 . chapter 1
oh, those good-looking assasins! Gavrilo Princip rings a bell. I love your style. everything. I can't find a flaw. honestly.
Macca Lane 2005-02-22 . chapter 1
hm interesting
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